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The boys had just got into formation Lochie shouted Kemo He.Then in between the haka the warriors chests were burning red like a sun burn.BOOMING voices big eyes widin farshis faces scarying little kids.The haka was that loud it made a little baby burst into tears.Slap bang boom the warriors slaping there legs like they have never done before.The boys did a great job.Goosebumps rushing up my spin with laughter.
Wow Khalia, your vignette is absolutely bursting with quality vocab. You have really created a clear image in your readers mind. Ka pai!
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